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Ginny Potter - A Harry Potter Fanfiction Archive and Community -- Fictioneer | |
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Title: Changes Unforseen | Submit a Review
Anonymous: The ideas behind these chapters are truly imaginative and a well thought up idea. However your writing skill still has something to be desired… we need more detail! Id also love to see a greater transgression of time I don’t really know how long it’s been since Draco arrived till further points in the story. I understand it is difficult though wish greater detail and effort was put into this story you seem to be very found of. Keep practicing your on the right track, I hope to read more of these chapters.
x a fan x 2006-12-21 17:50:42
sezza01: great story, i like how u discribe everything, but i think the chapters could be a little smaller, but its really good, keep going. 2006-12-19 20:02:02
Anonymous: The story is good. It kept me reading and sometimes I forgot it was not by JK. 2006-12-19 15:05:22
Anonymous: Its an okay story a tad bit reptitive but other than that good. Story lines good and everything. Nice job! 2006-12-18 17:00:23
Anonymous: Hey, this is really good. I'm glad that the pace isn't too fast or too slow, as is often the case, and the plot is enticing. Keep writing! I can't wait to see where it goes! 2006-12-16 22:17:49
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